Love: Not Always Good!
65I tried to see across the beautiful bare trees
Looking for the sea
I can’t see it, nor are there any leaves
No water, no air, no me
No me, you see, I am not free
Not free from bare trees
Looking for the beautiful sea air
Oh my, will I see it, hear it?
Help me Lord
For I have cut the cord
I don’t need him anymore
I run and run and run
I didn’t see the sun
I hurt, I cried and I died
I finally found the strength
Deep down inside
Down to my core
To look for the Lord
I found the power
To seize the day
And no longer be that coward
And in a cold day in May
I did it, I did it, I did it
I looked for the sea through the bare trees
And I found me
I run hid and run some more
Until I found the Lord
I am free from him
Lord helped me be free
I hear the sea through the bare trees
I hear the water and I see the leaves
Now I can breathe
There Is Always Help!
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Very nice indeed.
Thank you all, I am still learning and spreading my wings in poetry so I do appreciate the kind words. :)
BC99, yes, that is my alter ego side, thanks for compliment, love it!
Very expressive, almost excruciatingly so...I wanted to see a happy ending, and I did... Thank you for this, keep it up, you have much to give... Larry
Maven101, THANK YOU, I am trying and learning about poetry. I am so new and I appreciate your reading and giving me encouragement!
Very powerful - from 'I am not free' to 'now I can breathe' - you take the reader through your journey with style and passion.
Shalini, I appreciate you responding and thrilled that you felt it too! Thank you!
The strength to escape when you feel so alone and weak is a wonderfull thing! I liked this, it makes me wish I could write poetry. oh, and I loved the images of the sea, and bare trees.
Dennisematt, you are so right. Thank you, I am trying my wings at poetry, we will see. I appreciate it so much!
When you look back now.. you will find that your trees have grown beyond the emptiness. You have the right to always be happy and grow from those roots that found your happiness. Promise yourself to never accept less than that and your tree will bloom. Take care Ladybird..you have no need to fly away anymore. Your home is in your heart.
Pearldiver, my tree is fully bloomed but your comment almost made me cry, it was so beautiful. Thank you for this comment.
Hi, I just called in to say hi and mark up a good work. Thanks for the nice comment; I'm pleased that the spring bought leaves; so important for an evergreen. Take care.
This fledgling poetry, as you describe it, soars just fine. I enjoyed reading it a few times over, to better focus on your setting, which is also I think used as a great metaphor. Well done Ladybird33.
pearldiver, thank you and I appreciate you stopping by and reading my poetry.
timothy, how are you? I am not as good with poetry, still in the learning mode, so I can't thank you enough for the comment! I appreciate it so much!
msorensson 2 years ago
Lovely. Thank you and congratulations!