Love - You, Sexy, Hot & Steamy; A Poem

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By Ladybird33

In love, in love, oh my gosh I am in love

Or is it lust, lost in lust, no I am sure I am in love

Hold my hand, see my face, and love my soul

He loves me then he leaves me

 

Is it love or lust?

Sweating and mating, lifting and shaking

Ever does he make me reach my peak

Then he leaps

He waves and runs, makes his leave

 

I am sure it’s love for me

But think its lust for him

I cherish each moment

Waiting on him to get down on his knee

But instead he leaves

 

Yes, I think he loves me

Bodies fit so perfectly

Wanting, waiting and baiting

Rhythm matches the speed of light

But fades into the night

 

Oh why is there so much lust

But not enough love, me love, our love

I linger and stare and wish he was near

He moves so fast and says goodbye dear

 

Yes, yes, now I know that it’s love for me

Sex for him, but the key is getting to know us

He is gone, but it's a must to know us

Me love, is not our love and therefore gone love

 

Yes, I know its lust, hot and steamy but no love

Wake me up on this day and let me see the light

Or better yet, wait until tonight

For tonight, I will enjoy the lust, hot and steamy

For when it’s over, I must take flight

Realize it’s lust, not love and make my leave before light

Love or Lust?

Comments

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msorensson 2 years ago

Awesome, Ladybird33 [smiles on the outside but giggling on the inside]

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wesleycox Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

Awesome. A great poem

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you both, I am learning and playing around with poems and trying something new. So your responses are important to be, I am very grateful.

ralwus 2 years ago

Lust or love, both good. now I must find my partner

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Ralwus, you are too funny, thanks for commenting...both emotions are good but sometimes confusing :)

ralwus 2 years ago

Oh I am way too oldt to be confused over them. I know lust when I experience it, don't know a thing 'bout love though.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Your only as old as you feel :) I feel 29 but over 40...you know about love, just chose not to, right :)

guhy 2 years ago

For women, no love, no sex. For men, they can have sex with love or without love.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Guhy, you are very right about that. Thanks for commenting.

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chrismarva 2 years ago

Nice poem.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

chrismarva, thank you for reading and commenting.

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Harvey Stelman 2 years ago

Lady,

I think it was best said in my BOOK OF ENJOYMENT. A time for love, and a time for lust. Maytbe I heard "The Birds" sing it. No, it was my book.

There is time for both or your missing something.

This time the feet; nah!

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Harvey, how are you? I will have to read your book. Sorry you don't like the feet, I think my feet look pretty ;) Hope you are well, alwasy good to hear from you!

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Harvey Stelman 2 years ago

Lady, The book will take a little time with editing and some re-write.

I have a chance with some movies I've written. I made a new contact and he could be a good one. He's showing one to Will Smith, to see if he would like to star in it. I'm not getting my hopes up, I was screwed as a singer. I do appreciate your interest in the book. Re-reading it, I like it so much more and when the re-write and editing are finished .....................

Your feet are pretty, but (with my senior vision) I can't tell what is on them. Your husband must be so jealous of you showing this picture.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 2 years ago

Harvey, you are so funny, I love your comments appreciate you coming to see me! I love to show off different parts, don't you know :)

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epigramman 24 months ago

I was so overcome by your lusty ode to the beauty of writing that I had to go and jump into the lake just to cool off - good thing too - because I only live 100 feet away from Lake Erie.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 24 months ago

epigramman, I look forward to your comments!!! You are so entertaining! Thank you, this was a fun, steamy hub for me :)

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b. Malin Level 7 Commenter 19 months ago

Hey Ladybird33, This Poem is definitely my kind writing...very deep and very meaningful. It's fun showing our versatility in our work. I will enjoy following you.

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Ladybird33 Hub Author 12 months ago

b. Malin, thrilled you liked my hub. Thank you so much for reading and stopping by to see me!!!

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GlstngRosePetals Level 3 Commenter 9 months ago

I enjoyed reading your hub. I think I agree with guhy comment though. I think us woman fall in love and men can have sex either way. I look forward to reading more..

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Hear Me Level 3 Commenter 8 months ago

Great read! It shows the difference between men and women and our desires for two different things. It is so easy to confuse love when in fact it is lust and/or the other way. Needless to say, we keep at it for some reason! I wonder if it really is the chase?

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